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Wednesday, 12 April 2017

My Memoir


This Is my first day of school memoir.
















I don't really remember my first day of school so I only write a little bit.

What I would change:
I would change the subject of my story.

What I would do better:
I would find out a little more about my first day.




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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 April 2017 at 10:07

    HI alayna i like your first sentence really drew me in next time you could make the picture bigger then it would be easy to read but all and all it is really good

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  2. Anonymous13 April 2017 at 10:32

    Thats fine not everyone knows what happened on there first day of school :)

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  3. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 11:42

    Hi Alayna, I love how you described the difference between school and preschool. I think you did pretty good for remembering your first day of school because I didn't xD

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  4. Anonymous12 May 2017 at 10:29

    Hi Alayna, I love how you added a photo of your memoir and added a little bit of information about what it is about.

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